Wednesday, January 13, 2016

A BOY’S DREAM by zenyluzy



A BOY’S DREAM


When I grow up I’d like to be a braver
Stronger man in the earth
And see myself
Smiling in the ocean


But then I also wish to fly
Like a jet plane in the sky
I’d make a loop and dash
And come to land without a crash


Oh, how many things I’d want to do
Like building houses and a new hope
How very happy I would feel
If I could builds a bridge of steel.

3 comments:

  1. Second stanza should be" But then i also wish to fly, a whizzing jet plane in the sky, I'd make a loop and zoom and dash, And come to land without a crash" to retain the tempo...

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    1. Hi this is my favorite pom when i was in the elementary.
      Can you please write also the first and third stanza please. the first and 3rd doesn't sound right to me. thank you

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  2. Second stanza should be" But then i also wish to fly, a whizzing jet plane in the sky, I'd make a loop and zoom and dash, And come to land without a crash" to retain the tempo...

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