These poems and songs to convey
Here the poet lively scribbling today.
Quite the joy of music intended,
Like in heaven and it's not convoluted.
Returning the huge needles error.
If it's not just for my dreams that gives color.
A dream that quite bring me with honor,
Dividing the deeply unhide sorrow.
Smile on the lips, tread the stage.
Phantasm people shouting,whispering my name.
One's proudly screaming, saying it on range
But I took myself an overload shame.
It is as though every poems comes from the heart.
Finding some daily words, even it's hard.
Some lessons are learned best only through pain,
We must accept lose in order to gain.
poems come from the heart indeed..
ReplyDeletePoesy is brilliant! Just be careful with typo errors because they ruin an otherwise great composition. Keep writing!!
ReplyDeletePainting is silent poetry, and poetry is painting that speaks.great!keep it up
ReplyDeletePainting is silent poetry, and poetry is painting that speaks.great!keep it up
ReplyDeleteWell done ading:) keep it up👍
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That poems come from your heart yannae..that great.
ReplyDeletemost remembering line ” some lessons are learn best only through pain. We must accept lose in order to gain " I can relate with this base on true experiences. (Why so emotional?) Hahaha! Back to your poem. 😃 Your poem was good, I can feel the pain, the emotion. Can I ask something? What's with your poem? Is there something you relate this? Hahaha! Just kidding. Keep it up Yanaenae. Good work.
ReplyDeletenot every poems comes in our mind,but most of the time comes in our heart...just be on your self...keep up the good work !!! ^_^
ReplyDeleteCreative idea creative mind
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ReplyDeleteSome lessons are learned best only thru pain...tumatak sa akin...magaling,magaling..
ReplyDeleteUr mind has a vast idea of romance and love...great work..
ReplyDeleteUr positive thoughts are what makes this creation an awesome one!
ReplyDeleteA poem can be a poem if its felt...nd i felt it..job well done
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ReplyDeleteUr poem was stunning and come from ur heart.. :) and u have originality to create more poems in the world that many people amaze to your creativity psyche yanaenae. . :) good work yanaenae :)
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